Personal Ocean Of Blue Poem by Kate Gabrielle

Personal Ocean Of Blue



A lead ball drags me
Down
Under the water
Away from my starlit hopes
My dreams
Everything
Thrusting my hands above the water
Trying to stay afloat
Never has 'Keep your head up' rang so true
Then when you're sinking in your personal ocean of blue

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Stefanie Fontker 18 August 2011

Very deep, I like this. It is hard to stay afloat when everything is pulling you down.

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