~ Perspicacité ~
Ms. Nivedita
UK
28 May 2010.
Fore-sight
Hind-sight
Circum-sight
Collateral-sight
Aerial-sight
Panoramic-sight
Are but
Shot-sight
Short-sight
Sanctuarize into
Inside of Insight
Discover Delight.
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Glossary:
Perspicacité [Fr.] ~ Insight
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Smart poem Niv......Can we be delighted with what we find when we look inside insight? It could be a lot of heard work for some, having to face up to their feelings and acceptance of their personalities or........i think.........but it is worth the effort....
All the external sights finally lead to the internal insight. Good.
Go ahead mention all sights that you know but I like sightseeing, more places to see and enjoy. Nice thinkin', Nivedita.
You are very originalistic with your word play here, very good poem.
Clever couplet in conclusion to a series of observatory functions of similar word endings.We are left in no doubt as to the importance of insight.10.
Very original, the use of insight and sight. What a wonderful play of insight and yet keeping the reader so totally engrossed from start to finish. You have such a way to write with your own spirit and originality. Impressed.
Aerial-sight Panoramic-sight Are but Shot-sight Short-sight..nicely presented.....10 Short of sight Always dark and no light no love but only hatred To dooms day it may lead
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
yet being centripetal i need to know insight everything seems to slither by centro-sight, , , , , smile, wonderful, yet insightful 10++, thanks for sharing