You touch my battered heart
Like the feathered wings of angels,
You burst from my poor eyes
Like the tears of awakened love.
You flood perfume scarred lungs
Like the scent of summer roses,
You sparkle in my rhymes
Like the sentient stars above.
Your breath seeds sounds of rain
(Like distant drums) soothing my fears,
Your presence feeds my verse
Like mother earth's most verdant dreams.
Your voice calms savage soul
Like gentle breeze strumming tree limbs,
Your shadow shelters all
Like Light you move (you act) it seems.
You draw me from the sky
Like the call of nesting falcons,
You rob me of my breath
Like lava frozen in the sea
Your spark exceeds desire
Like a prism, reveals rainbows,
You fill my life with hope
Like a balloon that raptures me.
I think the essence of this poem just reverberates and I love the whole imagery that you managed to capture with words. Excellent Brian - shobana
A beautiful heart-catching poem on perfect love. Imagery is outstanding, it brings the words alive, I can feel and touch them. Too bad the malcontent can't capture the beauty that you so easily can. Great write, Brian. Love it. RoseAnn
Your breath seeds sounds of rain (Like distant drums) soothing my fears, Your presence feeds my verse Like mother earth’s most verdant dreams absolute beauty in these words!
Your pen fills the ink of hope to flow freely on verses of love where each words were glittering like twinkling star That's the beauty of your write.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
What a lovely poem - such emotion on display. It appears no part of you has been left untouched by this consuming passion. This kind of love only comes once in a lifetime - so rare!