Phantom Poem by Crimson Love

Phantom

Rating: 5.0


I sense my beauteuos phantom,
Where she is...I do not know,
A game of hide and seek,
I always seem to lose.

A delicate apparition,
Coming in sight, to only dissapear,
Taunting me with the beauty I have yet to see,
A faceless woman is whom I seek,
A saddened life, one left so bleak.

Your airy form appears, Only to my mind,
Such a pleasant fiction,
That eludes every fact,
Am I wasting my time?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jacqui Broad 07 October 2011

Do you believe in ghosts, then? :) You write in a very peculiar fashion. One just want to read more, unravel the puzzle. You're good. You should become a mystery writer... :)

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Crimson Love 06 October 2011

Leslie...Perhaps the reason is that I like women? hmmmm..........

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As a girl, why is ur phantom a girl? Not Bad! ! not bad at all.

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Stefanie Fontker 06 October 2011

I genuinely love this, it is perhaps one of your best works. Time wasted, is not time wasted until you have named it so, I hope it all works out.

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