Ping Pong Poem by Puppy Luver (10 years old)

Ping Pong

Rating: 4.8


Little ping pong ball
back and forth you go
bouncing over table net
on your way to “pro.”

Poor little white ball
hit with a paddle
once two players start,
it’s on with the battle.

It leaped off the table
rolled under the couch
bouncing here and there
I hit my head, “Ouch! ”

Now the game is over
there’s no right or wrong,
til next time they play
the game of Ping Pong.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Risha : Ahmed 31 March 2007

Lovely poem that. Beautiful

0 0 Reply
Jalisa Berrain 28 March 2007

What Frank said to the 10th power.

0 1 Reply

Excellent work, P.L....A clever and witty write...Your structure is smooth & flows well..Lot's of potential in that Mind of yours...Keep that pen pumpin', my friend. ~ F.j.R. ~

0 0 Reply
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
Close
Error Success