Place Of Horror...! ! ! Poem by sania harris

Place Of Horror...! ! !

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I took a deep breath
I knew I was nearing my death
I closed my eyes
And tried to think about my mom’s advice
A lady with curly hair came near me
And I tried to give her a feeble plea
But she just nodded her head
And pushed up my bed
With a needle she neared me
And I screamed as loud as I could
Even though I knew it would do me no good
A minute or so I cried
Then with watery eyes I sighed
The dentist moved away with a smile
At last my tooth was pulled out!


(written on my first trip to dentist)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Stacey Watts 02 September 2008

Oh what a picture you painted I wa terrified until the end. I don't like the dentist either. I could fear your fear good write.

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Kris Smith 02 September 2008

Very good kept on the edge until the end Thanks Chris 10

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Joseph Poewhit 21 August 2008

NOTHING WORSE THAN A TOOTHACHE

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