(september 12 / nyssa oregon)

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Places I have Been

he sat outside the grocery store,
Watching the world go by.
If he was eighty, he was ninety four,
With a big ole smile toothless and sly.

Grandpa we called him, out of respect,
just one more of the guys.
Energy and laughter he did not lack,
But he told some awful lies.

he smelled like cumin, the old man spice,
But he was always clean and neat.
When girls walked by he was all sighs,
Sweating in the Texas heat.

I saw her coming four blocks away,
In her red mini-skirt.
The first eye candy of the early day,
Sashaying like a big ole flirt.

And grandpa's eyes started to shine,
his toothless smile just grew.
I couldn't blame him she was so fine,
She was some kind of view.

As she walked past, the wind picked up,
And gave us all a thrill.
Blowing her skirt from bottom to top,
We caught a glimpse of lace and frills.

Grandpa just smiled, and I asked him why,
his face was one big grin.
my twelve year old eyes, just saw him sigh,
he said, 'thinking of places I have been.'

7/18/12 Alton Texas

Submitted: Wednesday, July 18, 2012
Edited: Wednesday, July 18, 2012


Poet's Notes about The Poem

Luis Blanco was his name, he was a neighborhood institution in the early sixties. he loved everyone in the hood especially the boys that hung around him and helped him get around and did various odd jobs for him.
he would give us candy and the best beef stew I ever tasted, he said the secret ingredient was okra. he was one of the good guys.

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  • Joseph Anderson (8/13/2012 3:07:00 PM)

    I ain't quite there yet, but can appreciate that old codgers attitude. A real fun write that has me chuckling
    as I write- gotto give this a 10

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  • Smoky Hoss (7/18/2012 12:24:00 PM)

    Sounds like he truly was one of the good-guys; and this truly is one of the good-poems. Great story telling here Juan.

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