Planet Earth Poem by Linda A

Planet Earth

Rating: 5.0


i look up to a black universe
then down at dirty bare feet
there must be nothing worse
than feelin the darkness inside of me
i didn't think much of it at first
but I soon was thinkin constantly
cause the sun shines down on earth
and I am too blinded to even see
my entire beings immersed
in shadows of some fantasy
so with the emptiness I converse
and in my pain i conceive
and in this pain i give birth
to all i know and believe
like how each grain of sand and dirt
is also in me-when i sweat or bleed
there's no quenching my thirst
i have just enough of what l need
and no more-poverty in the multiverse
is strange as dark dawns-as bittersweet
as my struggle, my heavens curse
incarnations are facades of mortality
and whats real will never die or disperse
but i'm clearly in the wrong galaxy

Friday, July 24, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: confusion
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Smoky Hoss 25 July 2015

... in the wrong galaxy... oh yes, very good! ! !

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Sandra Feldman 24 July 2015

A very special cosmic work. Extremely well written Great depth. Strong philosophical inclination. Liked it very much

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