Wind me up and watch me go,
Play me like a piano,
Touch and play every key,
Press down the ivory.
Take control, it isn't hard.
Tune each note, lay down the card,
Bend the noise and manipulate,
Take control and dominate,
Sit and play and press and pound,
Uncomforable? Then change the sound.
Wind me up and watch me go,
Play me like a piano.
if this is not poetry somebody show me some.. spectacular, no exaggerations...
Very well metered Chris. Rhyming go with piano and key with ivory for example show a sense of maturity I would expect from an older, more experienced writer. Good job.
Hello Chris...this has rhyme and rhythm and flows well...I enjoyed it very much.. thanks for the invite...Cheers Alf
can you play me like a cello? : p very nice read.: D
wow this is very beautiful. you've made a beautiful creation. -courtney
shows up you as a genuine personality. very well conceived and written. voted10 surya
shows up you as a genuine personality. very well conceived and written. voted10 surya
Mmm........it is very nice and its expression very strong and it touches my soul keep on your writting laila lili
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
this is actualy good, which suprises me... Zane, or should i call your Mr. begger?