maria sudibyo

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Please ask me when it was over


you never know what I'm feeling
because you are not here
I can't see you
I can't hear you
but I always surrounded by you
you teach me joy
you teach me sorrow
you show me joy
you show me sorrow
I have danced like red shoe
and my breath lost when it was over
I have eaten bowl of chillies
and my tongue burned when it was over
you never know what I wished
the day you were gone
I have given love for you
and I still don't have the answer
because it was not over

Submitted: Thursday, October 30, 2008

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