Please Forgive Me Poem by sumaira ...

Please Forgive Me

Rating: 4.3


I know i was wrong
And i also mean it
.......forgive me........
What i did was wrong,
But no one can always be right
........forgive me.......
True - the past is done
It's giving me a new lesson everyday
...Don't be sad...
i know i was wronge
sorry sweety....
....forgive me plz...
Forgiveness is in your nature
I don't want you to cry anymore
I love you my sugar cane
.......So plz forgive me......


for you Ben thanks for correcting

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tom Harding 23 February 2008

nice plea. liked the sugar cane.

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PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE 18 January 2009

SO HEARTFELT THANKS FOR SHARING

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Jihad T 20 January 2009

i like it but you've try to improve it more 10 for it

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<font color=black>Nagourta 21 January 2009

You show great heart, and also an uncontrolled blackness in you...it is good when a poet instills an emotion inside of me, so go forth feeling that fullfillment. If nothing else you have spoken to me....

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Sadiqullah Khan 28 January 2009

My sugar cane, so sweet and thses days its the season. Simple lines coming from heart that has already forgiven. Why shall someone not forgive, be it God.10

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Ershad Mazumder 13 February 2009

Its like a personal letter to a friend. Its not poetic. All expressions are not poetry. Thanks for sharing your feeling with us.

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Kesav Easwaran 11 February 2009

my sugar cane! wonderful expression, Sumaira...so sweet...no matter your friend won't deny you forgiveness...nice write emotionally expressive...10

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Ben Gieske 09 February 2009

A worthy plea. Your sincerity is most evident. Even though we love there is no guarantee that we will not offend or hurt. So asking forgivenss and being forgiven must go together if love is to grow.

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Eyan Desir 09 February 2009

This one was sweet, i laugh haha nice poem haha

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Jim Norausky 08 February 2009

Very nice poem. Contrition is evident is a sincere manner. Thank you. Jim

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