Please Forgive Me Poem by nader baheri

Please Forgive Me

Rating: 5.0


The time for me? fulfilled with your soul
And a wet breeze touched my eyes
The night to the dawn
Oh i wont forget
To where i went with you that nights
To the lands where the strangers were so familiar
I wont forget with whom
I went so that your unseen lips touched my unreal tears
I wont forget with whom i ascended to the god
And touched the life which was like the spring wind
With whom i comprehend the beauty of life
My dream i can not trust, now i am stripping my love
In my dreams the truth is bare and you
Dancing on the edge of my heart
Maybe you fall in to it maybe you not.
So please forgive me for what i ve done
Please forgive me if i let you down
If you turn your back on me and say go away
I believe we will be friends
Someday we will share our dreams
Someday we will make them green
We will have the stars
We will take the skies
Off our heads
And will fly to nowhere

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
I have annoyed a wonderful friend of mine here on ph.so i wrote it to show how sorry i am.
i am so sorry
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Valsa George 03 March 2013

The apology coming from the depths of your heart will be accepted by who ever it is and it may lead to the binding of ties to last for ever! Good luck! !

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A Dark Lifetime . 17 February 2013

Well your dear friend has to accept the apology because it cant get better then this! ! ! Amazing like always.

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Ellias Anderson Jr. 28 January 2013

It's really perfect! you always write perfectly my dear friend.so nice.! as sunprincess said, your action, i mean the way of asking for forgiveness is so beautiful. also i believe that you are a wonderful person too. Your friend, Ellias.

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Poetheart Morgan 27 January 2013

The ways of love always given and asking for forgiveness. Really, we never know where is the right path. But is a good way to sustain one love.

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Unwritten Soul 25 January 2013

All we need is to think positive and you act sweet in this As human your friend maybe doing something that is for your goodness that you cant see, the sacrifice maybe, we maybe dont really understand but true words meaning not all revealed in just listening Just remember If your friend really a friend and appreciate you Sure forgiving and touch of warm will wrapping you As friend is a kind of love, and to be alive in heart.even the beat stopped_Soul

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