Please Help Me Poem by Laura Hollan

Please Help Me

Rating: 5.0


The hits are coming down harder
My bruises become darker
And the screams which were once loud
Now becomes whimpers

I am begging for you to stop
But you don't seem to hear
Because you do not stop
Instead I feel more fear

I fall to the floor but you pick me up
Sling me against a wall
Start pounding me with all
The power you have over me

I see the blood smeared on my skin
Through heavy eyes that hurt when i try to see
And all i can think of is
Someone please Help Me

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kelly Allen Vinal 06 September 2006

Painful and powerful - I hope it is vicarious...

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William Jackson 05 September 2006

Good poem, but if this is truly confessional, get out of there and never look back. Get out. You are worth so much more and deserve gentleness and kindness.

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Nimal Dunuhinga 05 September 2006

Life will show you the road where you intend to go?

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