Treasure Island

Ali Sabry

(11/8/1988 / Iraq - Baghdad)

Please My Lovely Lady Don't Leave Lonely


Oh my dare
It's very long time you sent letter for me
Why you are keeping yourself silent in front of me
My dear let me know if you want me
Cause I need to see you for a while
Also for sure
You burned fire inside my body when you left me lonely
This fire it will never extinguish until I see you again
Please my lovely lady don't leave me alone
Cause I need you here beside me in all the time
Specially every second of the night
You know honey that I feel in comfort just when I see you beside me in whole the night
Honey I'm asking about you in all the time but I think nobody want you to know my news
Oh my darling
Why you don't ask about me
I'm afraid you will go to forget me
After you will never remember me when you will go far away from me
If you left me for a day my soul will go with you to that place you go
& my eyes will be with you
My eyes will light your way
I need you please let me see you someday
Darling I need you please let me see you for once
Please don't leave me lonely
You are my beautiful lovely lady
I love you from all my heart

Submitted: Wednesday, October 24, 2012

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  • Alookh (matin) (9/18/2013 6:08:00 AM)

    i should confess that i love this love! ! ! u try alot and if only she knew! ! ! .....u are a great lover.....have u heard the story of FARHAAD my dear frnd? ....u remind me of his story....dear Ali! (Report) Reply

  • Dimu Eric Olowoparija (12/12/2012 12:25:00 AM)

    If you left me for a day my soul will go with you to that place you go' love these lines. great but you still need to edit it. its a great poem (Report) Reply

  • Tajudeen Shah (12/8/2012 1:53:00 AM)

    Dear poet Ali
    listen, your amorous desire is very evident, but in versification, i would love to give a few tips with all humbleness. every poet can have his/her way of expressions. You, being in tender age and modern, your outlook and approach to the subject of romance should surely be different from the classic nature.
    in this respect, let me send you some suggestion soon, you must read a few romantic poems of various literature, giving importance to English Romantics, Lord Byron, JOhn Keats, S T Coleridge, P B Shelley and so on.
    Please make sure you edit each work properly before posting; for mechanics for writing, spelling, style, content, theme establishment and so on.

    wish you wonderful poetic future.
    brother Tajudeen shah (Report) Reply

  • Edward Dzonze (11/22/2012 12:21:00 PM)

    Your poems carries a lot of sense but you might need to employ some poetic devices like metaphors, similes, alliteratiomn e.t.c so that they dont sound like mere stories (Report) Reply

  • Ezna Stephna (11/17/2012 6:59:00 PM)

    A real lovely romantic poem from your heart. words are so emotional........ that touch the core of the heart of anyone who read this poem. +10 Exceelent. (Report) Reply

  • Derek Haughton (11/14/2012 11:11:00 AM)

    First of all let me say anyone who has lost love must empathise with you. I rarely comment on the content of poems so take that as sincere.
    I agree with R. K. Singh this could be shorter, unfortunately repeating how much love you have doesn't increase it and the poem loses strength from that. Better to show your love than tell it. Try metaphor: Your heart a solitary cloud in a firmament of love, a fawn bereft in a vast desert of alone. (Report) Reply

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