Please Read My Poetry.. Poem by Wojja Fink

Please Read My Poetry..

Rating: 5.0


Sending requests down my broadband line
please read this exciting new poem of mine
189 comments you've already got
I can't read all them I'm no poetical swat
and I'm no longer excited by lines that just swear
your emotional dilema I don't realy care
the colour of her eyes the size of her bust
your description with words I don't realy trust
you've got yourself tangled in some emotional dream
the deeper it'll get the more that you scream
it's all just a drama going round in your head
and you ask for more comments to what's already been said
but I've nothing to say my heart is like ice
and my mind's staying cool I think it's quite nice
to not have to comment with freedom of speech
so please don't ask me, for I've nothing to teach.
but wish you good luck with whatever you say
and not too many requests will come your way.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Hitesh Sheth 24 March 2009

More you have more you want..................greed...............10+++ Send this people to as many people as possible.........

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Stephen Stirk 23 February 2009

Marks 147 out of 10? ? ? . Awarded to you by Steve who has green eyes and a large bust.

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T S 23 February 2009

That is so so good I really do like it Tracy

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