Please Tell Me Poem by Aldo Kraas

Please Tell Me

Rating: 5.0


Please tell me
That I can put my trust in your love
God
Because
I know that your love exist
But
I just don't know if I can put my trust in your love
Please tell me
That I can built my trust in you
I want to do that
Because I feel that I need

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
x... x... 15 September 2007

Nice Aldo, and yes, he is perhaps the one person that you can always trust even thought we don't always feel it, he has our backs and our well being in his hands., marci...[am away have had no time since last sunday to read or write. At daughters in Illinois.]

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Cynthia Yildirim 14 September 2007

Is this poem incomplete or meant to sound incomplete? Its sounds like you wanted to write a poem today but you had to force yourself, its sounds as if you had writers block today. you should never force a poem my dear. You are better than that. Am i right? I love your poems though you have wonderful style.

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Aldo Kraas

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Sao Paulo Brazil
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