Palas Kumar Ray

Rookie - 200 Points (India)

Pleasing Living Gods

You need please the God of Sun once in a year
You need please the God of Rain once in a year
You need please the God of Fire once in a year
You need please the Goddess of water once in a year
You need please the Goddess of wealth once in a year
You need please the Goddess of Knowledge once in a year
You need please the Goddess eliminating darkness once in a year
You need please the Goddess demolishing evil forces once in a year

You need please very angry God 'Shani deva' the saturn, once in a week
You need please all Living Gods around you every day and every moment.

© Palas Kumar Ray.All rights reserved.

Submitted: Tuesday, October 06, 2009
Edited: Saturday, June 07, 2014

Topic of this poem: god


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  • Rookie - 62 Points Kesav Easwaran (10/13/2009 8:49:00 PM)

    You need please God all days all years through out your life...for your 'needs' are endless and diversified you know!
    Good thinking that goes to create a good poem here...thanks...10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 279 Points Indira Renganathan (10/11/2009 8:17:00 AM)

    I (infact all of us) have never heard of any god's is only human nature to make any dead human or even animal a god or a demigod...and all the rituals and worships I feel are necessary as means to unite us for a disciplined moral code of social life...god fearing helps one to stay away from immorality let go 'pleasing living gods'....thank you (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Mamta Agarwal (10/6/2009 11:30:00 AM)

    there is no pleasing or appeasing anybody living or mythical Gods. what living hell life would be if if one is an approval addict, or lives in fear of rejection.

    well said, Palas

    Mamta (Report) Reply

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