Neela Nath


Poem No 500 - Poem by Neela Nath

Time is bound to
make me remember,
the moments I spent
with you!
Plato even couldn't
have thought of
such love,
amoral, but beyond
physique!
Past still in present,
without any future!
You are my soul's
velvet-attire,
never to be detached,
inseparable
yet compelled
to get segregated.
When I put my first
emotion on the screen,
I didn't know anything
of that grotesque love-form.
So queer it is
that on reaching
my poem no 500,
I'm still in dilemma,
between my reality
and my fantasy.
I'm floating in
a vessel of dream
to reach you.


Comments about Poem No 500 by Neela Nath

  • Freshman - 605 Points Maya Hanson (3/11/2014 5:57:00 PM)

    This is amazing! ! ! I'm going to celebrate my 200th probably in a few days :) good job! (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 10,939 Points Soulful Heart (3/3/2014 11:28:00 AM)

    Wow...5 n double zero......a penta score of thoughts that have bcome immortal through poetry...an achievement that i dream to reach n am yet not 1 zero near it.....kudos to the poet (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 7,720 Points Neela Nath (3/1/2014 10:04:00 PM)

    Sekharanji, you were the first to comment on my 500th poem.That's great for me.Thank you very much for your encouraging words. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 7,720 Points Neela Nath (3/1/2014 10:01:00 PM)

    My heartfelt thanks to you all.I'm just speechless and overwhelmed.Geetha, you always support me.That's an important thing for me.It inspires me a lot.And the variety of your poems attract me.Everyday I read your writes.Keep on inspiring us all.Love and loads of love. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 9,023 Points Geetha Jayakumar (3/1/2014 1:08:00 PM)

    Congratulations Neela. I was waiting to see your 500th poem. finally it arrived. Beautiful poem Neela.
    I loved reading each lines...
    One really feels its reality or fancy. Keep writing Neela. Your poems are fantastic and I read many of them. You pen it very well. So keep writing whatever may come and never anything stops you from writing.
    Looking forward for again a 500 poems flowing from your pen....
    Congrats.... (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 4,802 Points Sekharan Pookkat (3/1/2014 11:17:00 AM)

    congratulations, my dear friend Long live till your 120th year -because it is the full life of a human being! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, March 1, 2014

Poem Edited: Thursday, March 6, 2014


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