Poem To An Unnameable Man Poem by Dorothea Lasky

Poem To An Unnameable Man

Rating: 4.4


You have changed me already. I am a fireball
That is hurtling towards the sky to where you are
You can choose not to look up but I am a giant orange ball
That is throwing sparks upon your face
Oh look at them shake
Upon you like a great planet that has been murdered by change
O too this is so dramatic this shaking
Of my great planet that is bigger than you thought it would be
So you ran and hid
Under a large tree. She was graceful, I think
That tree although soon she will wither
Into ten black snakes upon your throat
And when she does I will be wandering as I always am
A graceful lady that is part museum
Of the voices of the universe everyone else forgets
I will hold your voice in a little box
And when you come upon me I won't look back at you
You will feel a hand upon your heart while I place your voice back
Into the heart from where it came from
And I will not cry also
Although you will expect me to
I was wiser too than you had expected
For I knew all along you were mine

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Edward Kofi Louis 20 February 2017

Shaking! ! You have changed me already. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Richard Wlodarski 20 February 2017

You are a fireball! The poem is profound. Full of emotion and mystery. Haunting. Awesome vivid imagery. Deservedly Poem Of The Day. I will definitely be reading more of your poetry!

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Sylvaonyema Uba 20 February 2017

I am a fireball. Well written and communicated. Sylva.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 20 February 2017

You were mine..... thanks for sharing....

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Ratnakar Mandlik 20 February 2017

I will not cry, although you will expect me to Thanks for sharing. Congrats on modern poet of the Day.

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Deluke Muwanigwa 30 September 2023

I meant to give 5 stars but i been away so long could not remember whether 5 stars eist left or right of centre. Never mind. A beautiful poem.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 30 September 2023

TOP Marks for you Dorothea dear.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 30 September 2023

Congratulations dear Poetess being chosen by PoemHunter.and Team as The Modern Poem Of The Day. I am very happy for you and I like your poem very much since it is a very honest poem, a methaphorical poem so well expressed

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Sylvia Frances Chan 30 September 2023

A powerful poem, very honest and according to the poet's inner heart, and also spoken out, never think that women are weaker than man, but on the other hand I have great pity with the man mentioned here

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MAHTAB BANGALEE 26 October 2022

there is love which crafted 'I was wiser too than you had expected For I knew all along you were mine '- nice to read

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Dorothea Lasky

Dorothea Lasky

St. Louis, Missouri
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