Poems Poem by udit kumar sahoo

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all poems should be short and brief,
short in length, brief in meaning.

pithy, if they are meant to be,
a single gust should overpower you.

stun ifthey must with a message,
words must be powder dry and sharp as nail.

cloy, if they must with potions of love,
make your words soak with oodles of experience.

all the same, make them short and brief
for,
a four year old baby's stutter tells you more
about love and life, than an adult's ever would.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Aashish Ameya 30 August 2006

this is clear cut direction for poets how to write good poetry..i like this

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Onida 23 December 2006

nice poem.with a GREAT topic! ! regards, Nida

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Risha : Ahmed 02 December 2006

very true. well said.

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Charles Garcia 30 October 2006

I agree as it does not take many words to get a message through. my kind of poetry. all poems should be short and brief, short in length, brief in meaning. charles garcia

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Prasanna Kumari 18 September 2006

i agree with you.but poems can be long if they can keep u reading at one breath up to the last and make u feel it in the pulse. nice poem

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John Tiong Chunghoo 03 September 2006

try haiku. udit. first kiss my hair dances to the gentle wind

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