Poems With Difference Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Poems With Difference

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How does the imagination strike the mind?
Does the brain allow them place to find?
Why they are termed as crazy and dreamy persons?
Does this statement find any favour with reasons?

May be poetic appetite does not allow them to grasp?
Appeal in wordings may not be enough to last
It is as if some is asked to under go test and take medicine
Feeling good inwardly but with bitter test of quinine

We may see enough water available in pot
Put to test while making it very hot
It may turn into vapor beyond certain point
Poetry is also like vapour………………..

Ideas may suddenly emerge in sequence
Mind may pick up and build it as consequence
How to project it rightly may prove as acid test
It may be looked as fine blend of poetry and best

Somebody may try it hard on words skill
Many may stuff it with metaphors and fill
Single sentence may now bear different look
Golden sentences may appear in costly book

Nature, heavenly bodies and earth simply provide
Kind of message, love and passion does not divide
Humanity survives with strengthening of the bonds
Poetic wisdom is stored like enough water in ponds

Easy words, fine presentation and theme crate impact
Love, passion, generosity improve with certain contacts
Poems can rule the hearts with immediate healing touch
Pulse can be felt as if it has enough power to offer so much

Poems can be those who can touch millions and rule
Lessen their worries and react with mind so cool
Poet Kalidasa* was novice and considered as fool
His poems are master pieces without help from any school

Rule the heart, touch the nerve and excel in field
Tremendous response and enough skill to yield
The desirable effect may be seen in poetic world
There may not be going back after developing cold

Poems must find the light of the day
Many may side line you and keep at the bay
You got to sail through and find the way
Stars and sky will be yours with more to say

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Darshna Chopra 06 August 2010

How does the imagination strike the mind? Does the brain allow them place to find? Why they are termed as crazy and dreamy pers.. got to with certain differences...10

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Kamlesh Ambalal 05 July 2010

How does the imagination strike the mind? Does the brain allow them place to find? Why they are termed as crazy and dreamy persons? Does this statement find any favour with reasons? ...level always differe from man to man....10

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Aira Olayvar 10 January 2010

Very nice! “Ideas may suddenly emerge in sequence Mind may pick up and build it as consequence.” It is the true way of the poets/ most of the writers, and the best part of it is when we are walking, which allows us of no readiness for pens and papers. Though most often times, when we are busy doing our job that the thoughts just suddenly emerge from nowhere. ‘How to project it rightly may prove as acid test It may be looked as fine blend of poetry and best.” Yeah, this is well said… because if novel were the words best arrange, poetry should be the best words in its best arrangement… that’s why I am here to practice. hehe “You got to sail through and find the way Stars and sky will be yours with more to say” So this is it… and that’s it.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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