Poetry Poem by Robin Strand

Poetry

Rating: 5.0


Prose

Is this

How you are

I know nothing about.

How often I wonder why

Right after we started drifting away

How I finally managed to release the knot

You already knew before we left

Its the way this works

That makes the test

Relax my love

This is

Poetry

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Heather Wilkins 24 August 2014

I like the form with which you wrote poem easy to read leaving is always painful

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Mac Adrone Adonay 10 February 2014

a good poem, I like the way you write it, free verse yet powerful :)

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Paul Brookes 16 November 2013

I think this is how sometime we all feel (except of course the philistines like Bri) Thanks for sharing BB : O)

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Bri Edwards 15 November 2013

i guess you are new to poemhunter. welcome aboard. now i find this poem easier on me than the tree poem, but it still is not right for me. i think it is cute how it is shaped like a triangle/woman's breast/mountain-turned-on-its-side. some punctuation might help the readers. thanks for sharing. :)

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