Poetry: [plum Opened Poem by starseven0 starseven0

Poetry: [Plum opened] posted
(2008-12-28 19: 02: 34)
Emotion Category: Ah Poetry


Plum opened. When flying in the snow
I wrote light poetry, wrote all the love
Wrote these elegant red, delicate fragrance. So that they
Covered with a path in front of

I listen quietly singing plum
Listen to crystal clear winter heart
Listen to the story of the village in a snow dance
Side, is a warm light

I embrace the plum blossom, kissed her elegant red
Delicate fragrance. Cock kiss dim
Moonlight innocent kiss. So that the pace of drifting
Persistent and firm

Plum opened. Around the depth of winter
Surrounded by snow, light close to my heart live
I'm so happy. In a snow-ri
First through a hand-written poetry, happy to fall asleep



Ah indeed a land of outstanding son, Ah This soil is indeed bred out of the mountains shook the soul of the great poetry, we are that the mountains -冯 文 淑 - Samrin Comments


Akun assumes poetry and song: [Plum blossom has opened] rotate classifying closely to (2008-12-28 emotion at 19: 02: 34) : Akun poetry and song Plum blossom has opened. I write down poetry and song slim and graceful during the period of the snowflake dances in the air, write down all love writing down this red, exquisite incense simple and elegant. Alley making their whole family of shop front I listen to plum blossom quietly sing listening to midwinter glittering and translucent be warm one light by picking transparent way of thinking listening to the village story dance on snowflake a sheet of, I embrace plum blossom, kiss her exquisite red incense simple and elegant. The dim crow of kiss kisses clean moonlight. Make the step drifting inflexible but staunch Plum blossom has opened. Being encircled by a snowflake around midwinter be, be sticking my lively fresh heartbeat gently I am what happy. Be resting self's head on the poetry and song writes with own hands down in snow a sheet of in brightness, to self's heart's content but be falling asleep Akun is excellent land son indeed, this earth is pregnant with Akun indeed having gone out of great soul poetry and song of shocking hills, we it is that hills- - Feng Wen Sang Lin kind and gentle- to discuss


Plum blossom has opened. I
write down poetry and song
slim and graceful during
the period of the snowflake
dances in the air, write
down all love writing down
this red, exquisite
incense simple and elegant.
Alley making their whole
family of shop front

I listen to plum
blossom quietly sing
listening to midwinter
glittering and
translucent picking
transparent way of
thinking listening to
the village story is
warm one light by
dancing on snowflake a
sheet of,

blossom, kiss her
exquisite red incense
simple and elegant.
The dim crow of kiss
kisses clean
moonlight. Make the
step drifting
inflexible but
staunch


Plum blossom has opened.
Being encircled by a
snowflake around midwinter
be, be sticking my lively
fresh heartbeat gently I am
what happy. Be resting
self's head on the poetry
and song writes with own
hands down in snow a sheet
of in brightness, to
self's heart's content but
be falling asleep

Akun is excellent land son indeed, this earth is pregnant with Akun indeed having gone out of great soul poetry and song of shocking hills, we it is that hills- - Feng Wen Sang Lin kind and gentle- to disc





阿 坤 作
诗 歌 ： [梅 花 开 了 ]转 贴
(2008-12-28 19: 02: 34)
情 感 分 类 ： 阿 坤 诗 歌


梅 花 开 了 。 在 雪 花 飞 舞 的 时 候
我 写 下 轻 盈 的 诗 歌 ， 写 下 所 有 的 爱
写 下 这 淡 雅 的 红 、 细 腻 的 香 。 让 它 们
一 起 铺 满 门 前 的 小 径

我 静 静 地 听 梅 花 唱 歌
听 隆 冬 晶 莹 剔 透 的 心 扉
听 村 庄 的 故 事 在 一 片 雪 花 上 跳 舞
身 边 ， 是 一 盏 温 暖 的 灯

我 拥 抱 梅 花 ， 吻 她 淡 雅 的 红
细 腻 的 香 。 吻 朦 胧 的 鸡 啼
吻 清 白 的 月 光 。 让 漂 泊 的 脚 步
执 著 而 坚 定

梅 花 开 了 。 环 绕 着 隆 冬
环 绕 着 雪 花 ， 轻 贴 着 我 鲜 活 的 心 跳
我 是 多 么 幸 福 。 于 一 片 雪 光 里
枕 着 亲 手 写 下 的 诗 歌 ， 酣 然 入 梦



阿 坤 确 实 是 土 地 的 优 秀 儿 子 ， 阿 坤 这 泥 土 确 实 孕 育 出 了 震 动 群 山 之 灵 魂 的 伟 大 诗 歌 ， 我 们 就 是 那 群 山 -冯 文 淑 -桑 林 评 论