Poisioned Love Poem by little angel

Poisioned Love

Rating: 3.0


say it to me
it will make me feel better
what ever ur doing to me
i dont think its clever
its not helping me
ur making it worse
just plz tell me
loving u is not a curse
am no more strong
just say it in my face
tell me am wrong
ur love is like poision
runnig in my veim
passing through my heart
causing severe pain
i easily loved u
but cant forget u
after all if this
shall i say i love or hate u

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Daniel Einstein 18 September 2012

This poem is very sloppy, this is critiques not criticism, maybe you can edit this poem, the message is clear but the words need to be filled correctly.

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