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Yoonoos Peerbocus (2/8/2009 9:18:00 PM)
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the inner balance via clear diction goes to your credit.nice
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Reshma Ramesh (2/7/2009 11:40:00 PM)
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beautifully written..............superb narration! !
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Kesav Easwaran (2/2/2009 8:22:00 AM)
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words dancing in rhythm...a poetic polka this...good work, Sameer...10
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Sandra Fowler (2/1/2009 2:41:00 AM)
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The joyful dance of life. Your rhymes add music to the form.
May the happiness be continued, the worries only a shadow.
Take care.10 for a poet doctor.
Warm regards,
Sandra
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Tsira Goge (1/31/2009 1:47:00 PM)
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Very beautiful, Sameer 10.
Thank you..
Tsira
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Absent Wryta (1/31/2009 11:07:00 AM)
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excellently composed rhythm and rhyme piece. quite descriptive i could visualise it. nice work.10
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Mamta Agarwal (1/31/2009 10:12:00 AM)
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you know Sameer, i actually saw the polka dancers. you have very vividly captured the rhythm and beat, bonohmie and camraderie- lovers having fun- lovely. you have great ability to sketch lively scenes...10
Mamta
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