Poverty Poem by Konjit Berhane

simple as it shold be.nice poem konjit.

i´d really loved this one, it´s, i don´t know, well it´s real and sad and true.... anyway, i think we have the same prob writting, i always use rhymes i already know or that i´ve heard in songs and that makes my writing boring, it´s almost the same everytime.... anyway, i liked your poems much more than mine, you´re gonna be a great writter some day, just keep going :)

I think Chirs gave good advice that I should learn myself, that said, I enjoyed this poem, the message about how people suffer in the world is very important and the way you expressed it using family members made me feel it as I read it.

simple, honest, to the point and beautiful. thanks

Excellent piece of reality

Oho.... yes Poverty is continues to be a large problem

Machiko is best Waifu period

A brilliant ending to a simple poem. Beautifully done, Konjit! ! Brian

WOW, I dunno what to say, except that, that was a beautiful poem. Poverty affects all of us in some way. That was a great write, Never quit writing, Smiles N Hugs Willow: -)

I've been reading through quite a lot of your poetry, Konjit, and I find it fresh and young but at the same time much of it is deep and holds a message. I will continue to read it. I like this one for its simpliciity and for the last two lines, which finish it off brilliantly. Love, Fran xx