Powerful Poem by faye burford

Powerful

Rating: 5.0


how powerfull it is
those words that flow out
just like that blood
how it feels to know that
i'm not alone in all of this
a calmness is felt
in the pits of my torched soul
giving that bit of hope
that all of us should have
but reluctent to recieve or feel
as it seems like no big deal
just for today
is how i have to get through
if just for today i don't
is another day without scares.....
but the elastic gets pulled
& each day it gets thin
until that day it snaps
with terrafying conciquences
but as i go through all of this pain
i have to stop & think that
i'm not alone in this world
empathy & identifacation
how unreal it seems that
i am not alone.............

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lisa French 10 December 2009

I really like the way you write and describe things. I would love to read a lot more. You have got a good talent here!

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Faye Burford 10 December 2009

i'd apprieate all coments on my poetry

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