Powerful Hurricane Sandy Poem by Elizabeth Padillo Olesen

Powerful Hurricane Sandy

Rating: 4.8


Sandy gathered strength
from rivers and seas
flooding homes, fields,
markets and subways.

Sandy made a pact
with the strongest winds
knocking down trees,
buildings and other
man-made creations.

Sandy declared her power
over technological inventions
sending houses and streets
into days and nights
of darkness and cold.

Powerful Sandy
has just declared
her invincible power
over powerful humans!

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October 30,2012

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Romeo Della Valle 04 November 2012

Powerful Write! We, here in New York City and New Jersey have felt the tremendous impact of this mean Sandy! Your well crafted and thought provoking write is a clear description of the devastation left behind by this mean Sandy! 10+++ Thanks for sharing and keep it up! I hope you have a chance and read the two poems about Sandy that I posted: Storming Moments and New York it Shaking God Bless You! Romeo-New York City

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Aung Si 31 October 2012

well structured poem with the thought striking. Its a real deep thought and being happy is the literal meed of any being. Great.my vote is 10.Congrats.

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Elizabeth Padillo Olesen 30 October 2012

It is only raining and blowing here not like the super power of Sandy in USA Thank you very much for responding, dear Joseph.

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Joseph Anderson 30 October 2012

I hope you were not in it's direction. Is mother nature telling us something? You told of this tragedy in a stark and direct way.Well done-a needed reminder of what is beyond our control

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