Pray For A Scene Poem by tanya gupta

Pray For A Scene

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i pray for a scene,
i shall see, when we would surrounded by lots of trees.

a tree is that creature,
which decides our past present and future.
it provides everything a lain,
because it reflects kindness of god,
from each of its vain.

a tree which is deep inside the earth's core,
have the power of strongest four,
its a pridictor, habitat, producer and also our god for sure.

but now, we have created another defination for tree on land,
which is far away from my dream of dreamland.
whatever is going on, its because of our own,
and the time is not so far when we would become alone.

a tree which always sits in rain,
to just releive our erratic pain.
everytime it stands for getting hurt,
because of we, who need bloody comfort.

why are we spreading this slow poison,
which is making our future beyond everyone's vision.
why are we making this disastrous start,
the tree is crying from the core of its heart.

now, its the time when we all should understand,
that the things are still in our hand.
and if we never would stop,
then what will happen,
i think we can't even hope.

now, its a tree's chance to get by,
because its a time when we all would die.
at last, for living with trees all day,
i think i should start to pray.

Saturday, March 1, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: tree
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
V P Mahur 01 March 2014

Dear Tanya your way of expression always impresses me your feel of true love is creating unique imagery Thanks for so sweet melody

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Barnabas Michael 10 March 2014

Great Great and so many Great, this is fabulous content, you whent so cool expressing and crystal calm, bringin evry relevant thought to fit the flow...faFa....bolous

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Judah Daniel 19 March 2014

I totally agree with barnabas, it's a nice poem with cogent expression.

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Subhakanta Sahu 26 March 2014

Hi Tanya! admirable thought you have for the environment and the tree as our real God

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Sir Hosseyn Sabbaghi 27 March 2014

It impresses me. Nice Thanks

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Bri Edwards 16 May 2014

tanya, i'll send my comments in a private message. thanks for sharing. bri :)

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Loyd C Taylor Sr 15 May 2014

Hello Tanya. Your poem is interesting and different. Thanks for sharing, Loyd

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Saleem Zidi 27 April 2014

We should not bother about future. We should live for only present.

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Paul Sebastian 27 April 2014

Enjoyed the poem! Man must stop cutting down trees that care and protect him! Keep writing, Tanya! You are a talented young poet! !

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Paul Sebastian 27 April 2014

Great poem on why we need to pray for man to change his heart about cutting down trees that care for us! Enjoyed the poem! Keep on writing, Tanya! !

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