Prelude To 'You' Poem by Alok Singhal

Prelude To 'You'

Rating: 5.0


You...it was only you who I could feel was mine..
But I didn't know that the twist of fate is such a swine..
You..left me with nothing but few thoughts sublime..
Don't You..remember the time..
The first time I touched you..& your eyes started to dance...
was it my first brush with romance?
Or was it just my imagination?
For when you left me...with each step you took away from me..I could still see your eyes dance...
But perhaps the touch..is not mine but someone else...
You..it was only you who I feel was never mine....

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kseniya (Xeny) Rundel 24 June 2011

I like it very much and vote it 10+

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Dew Twinkle 14 December 2009

I think it is a very good poem, thanks for shearing it. It is so true what you say; 'nothing is yours for real'. :)

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Onelia Avelar 05 July 2008

I like the contradiction between the first and the closing line - as if in between are years and years...Well penned

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Charles Garcia 26 May 2007

very well written, i had the feelings a long time ago at the age of 15 oh! so long ago, charles garcia

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