Premise Under Surveillance Poem by Raj Arumugam

Premise Under Surveillance

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my local shopping centre
has the sign:
'WARNING: Premises under surveillance'
which is fine
as it will keep me
from breaking or stealing anything



a store in the centre
has a WARNING:
'Premise under surveillance' -
now, that will keep me logical
when arguing

Premise Under Surveillance
Saturday, June 25, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: humorous,humour,language
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
The word 'premise' is often missed in our shopping centres, as in the accompanying visual. This poem is a humorous look at this misuse of the word.
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