hasmukh amathalal

Gold Star - 67,392 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Prepare A Plan - Poem by hasmukh amathalal

No one likes to be left behind
Curse alone and feel as if blind
World has moved further
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Comments about Prepare A Plan by hasmukh amathalal

  • Gold Star - 67,392 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/10/2013 4:44:00 AM)

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    Very good

    Khalil Goddard19 minutes ago
    Very enjoyable to read. Well written.
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    interesting

    Andre Segovia19 minutes ago
    well written
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    Plan


    Edgar Morales-Alfaro15 minutes ago
    Nice (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 67,392 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/1/2012 7:33:00 AM)

    Sandra M. Dorazil2 minutes ago I love the direction you went with this poem! I also love the description in this poem! Just make sure you break up certain lines with commas or periods or something, otherwise it just seems like you are going on and on! Good job otherwise! : D (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 67,392 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/1/2012 7:33:00 AM)

    Prepare A Plan Martin Degener8 minutes ago Awesome Work. I agree with you always have a plav Comment +1 Description! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 67,392 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/1/2012 12:56:00 AM)

    No one likes to be left behind
    Curse alone and feel as if blind (Report) Reply








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