Mark R. Elias

Pretty Little Flower - Poem by Mark R. Elias

Pretty little flower
In a pretty vase
I this little hour
On you gaze.

In a pretty kitchen
On a pretty sill
You this little hour
Give me fill.

With your little petals
In a pretty style
You this little hour
In me rise

Pretty little hatred
And a pretty bile.
I this little hour
You despise.

Topic(s) of this poem: flower

Comments about Pretty Little Flower by Mark R. Elias

  • Freshman - 826 Points Birgitta Abimbola Heikka (8/26/2014 5:25:00 PM)

    Poem started out well. The last stanza does not match the rest. Also, in the 3rd stanza, second line: pretty style is a little vague. Needs more description. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, August 26, 2014

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