Princess And The Stranger Poem by Ata Khan

Princess And The Stranger

Rating: 4.6


Deep,
black eyes
unfamiliar
yet known eyes
lost, in the air
gazing
tranquil, clear
shining, smiling
and so bright

Whispered
'O stranger
come and see
do you see what I see?
rainbow dances
around me
flying doves
surround me
dewdrops fall
how longingly
to kiss,
and embrace
with warmth
my cheeks, lips
and this face..

The whirling breeze
my locks it
ruffles
In loving, softness
nature speaks
my heavenliness
it celebrates

But stranger
confess
you may
What brings you
here today? '

Her eyes still lost
in the air
Was it hope, or despair?

'O Princess
this i know
What you whisper
is very unique
What you see
is even rare
I, thus feel
most mundane
to follow an obvious
path ordained
I can't see
what you see
But
what i see
you can't admire

I see you
and these eyes...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Alex Searle 18 September 2009

Very cool. good flow and great diction.

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Adam Pinheiro 19 September 2009

Wonderfully motional poem, I enjoyed the nice imagery you portrayed. Good job ^^

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Rachel Butler 28 October 2009

'What you whisper is very unique What you see is even rare' Rachel Ann Butler

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Ritty Patnaik 23 December 2009

worth reading over and over again this beautiful poem.good flow of words and the last stanza is outstandimg. best wishes......ritty

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Akshita Nahar 12 January 2010

the imagery and idea behind it is really nice..

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@ tumac 03 March 2018

A beautiful poem for a beautiful woman so sensual mmmm

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Naida Nepascua Supnet 18 June 2012

every scene is passing right before our eyes and the story is enjoyed with your good words WOW.

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Pradyumna Jyotir 02 February 2010

lovely romantic poem...the flow is so natural...

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Siddic Nagdee 31 January 2010

It's written with much flair and beauty...nice one

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Fiona Liddle 28 January 2010

I really liked it.. I like the way the words just seem to flow one after the other- a little like the work of Walter de la Mare- and I can't wait to read your other poems

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