Prison Of The Mind Poem by Angel Smith

Prison Of The Mind



Life is a prison,
Oh God let me out.
No one to listen,
To hear when you shout.

Climb the walls of insanity,
Ride the waves of despair.
If you fall it don't matter,
There's no one to care.

Used to wish for a window,
To see birds, trees and sky,
But you're better without one -
Stops you aiming too high.

Watching freedom is painful,
For those locked away.
Seeing joy, love and happiness,
Another price that you pay.

Strong is good, weak is bad.
Be it false, be it true.
Your mind makes the choice,
And enforces it too.

Cell walls built by society,
With rules to adhere.
If you breach the acceptable,
You had better beware.

Hide the pain, carry on,
Routine is the key.
Don't let on that you're not,
What you're pretending to be.

Lock it all up inside you,
How badly that bodes.
Look out for that one day,
When it all just explodes.

Leaving naught but a shell,
Base functionality too.
But killing all else,
That was uniquely you.

So how do you grow,
With a time bomb inside?
Or how to defuse it,
Without destroying its ride?

You can't.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Keith Hendrickson 15 January 2009

another great piece top to bottom. i realy liked the ending. keep up the GREAT work

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brittany 05 December 2008

nice flow very nice i like your vocabulary very nice job!

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foxy babii 04 December 2008

wow that is seriously amazzin i love the way it flows i love the words you use it i unique well done 10 ++++

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