Prisonbreak Poem by PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE

Prisonbreak

Rating: 5.0


May I change my identity
Encourage myself
Breakout the prison
Move to self?

Lullaby of river
Your thought
Your hair's scent
I caught

Amorous glances
Shivers
The new soul in bodies
High livers

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Joseph Poewhit 05 November 2009

Reaches some high thoughts

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Emma Adamyan 05 November 2009

i liked it very much, my friend. it`s ur creativeness!

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Beauty Philosophy 24 December 2009

A nice poem with beautiful imagery...Well penned!

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Almedia Knight-Oliver 18 November 2009

Beautiful images 'lullaby river' et al. To be free is the only way to BE. a lovely poem my poet friend and a 10++++

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Tsira Goge 08 November 2009

Greetings, Nightingale... This is a graceful poem..10... Best wishes, Tsira

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Lovely imagery Persian. 'lullaby of river, your thought, your hair's scent I caught'. Good luck with your breaking away from the old into the new....10 love Karin

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M M 06 November 2009

Would you change your identity or find it when moving to the self....? A beautiful poem, which raises interesting questions... 10, of course!

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