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Pristine Love

No love is as overwhelming and as pristine,
As the maiden love of a lass, say of sixteen.
When, like closed petals of a bud she begins to unfold
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Dedicated to all the young lovers, in whose pristine minds love reigns supreme!

26 July 2013
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  • Khairul Ahsan (2/3/2014 12:17:00 AM)

    @Jessica Dehn,
    Thanks for reading my poem and the appreciation you've left here. Hope, you will have time to read some more and say a few more words.

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  • Khairul Ahsan (2/2/2014 11:45:00 PM)

    @Star Crossed Lady,
    Thanks a lot for your kind words on me and my poem. I am highly inspired and elated by your kind words.
    My poem was written for women of your age. I am glad that it met your liking.

  • Khairul Ahsan (2/2/2014 10:14:00 PM)

    @Crystal Conrick-knight,
    Thanks for reading my poem and the thoughts you shared.

  • Jessica Dehn (1/29/2014 4:09:00 PM)

    Beautifully written!

  • Khairul Ahsan (1/24/2014 9:30:00 PM)

    @ Sherlyn Davis,
    Thanks for reading my poem and leaving your generous comment here. I am inspired. Shall appreciate if you can make some time to read, rate and comment on a few more.

  • Khairul Ahsan (1/24/2014 9:08:00 PM)

    @ Michelle Hanes,
    Thanks for reading my poem and leaving your inspiring words!

  • Khairul Ahsan (1/24/2014 7:15:00 PM)

    @ Victoria Meza,
    Thank you very much for reading my poem and leaving your comment here. Thanks for your generous ten!

  • Khairul Ahsan (1/23/2014 2:46:00 AM)

    @ Angel Of The Night,
    Thanks a lot for your kind words. I am truly inspired!

  • Khairul Ahsan (1/22/2014 10:44:00 AM)

    @ Erika Wingo,
    Thanks for appreciating my poem. I am inspired.

  • Khairul Ahsan (1/22/2014 6:31:00 AM)

    @ Bri Edwards,
    1. The word 'pervasive' has been changed.
    2. At sixteen, girls may be well past 'onset of puberty', but here, the girl I am looking at, seems still to be standing at cross roads of childhood and puberty, meaning, she still has some childhood left in her, as she is entering a bigger and fanciful world of puberty at sixteen.
    3. The word 'pretension' has been changed by 'suspicion'. The meaning should be clear now.
    4. My views are different, from what you have mentioned in your p.s. Two categories would be alright, but not depending on English being used as primary or secondary language. The division could be based on whether English was used with appropriate grammar and punctuation, or without.
    Thanks for the elaborate critique. It has made my poem finer, I guess.

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