Privilege Audience Poem by Savita Tyagi

Privilege Audience

Rating: 5.0


Pushed by the wind a leaf rises high in sky
It dances under blue sky circumventing the trees
Slides through branches and manages to rise again
She is the lone dancer of that evening's performance
I am the privilege audience in time's chosen theater

Monday, September 29, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: Nature
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Amitava Sur 01 October 2014

A lovely poem on the natural dancing of a dry leaf, dancing with the wind.

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Chris Embrick 03 April 2018

A beautiful image that brings back many memories. The simple things in life are often the most beautiful and stimulate the imagination. Thank you poetess.

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Amar Agarwala 01 April 2016

So beautiful, that it is even hard for a reader to express his thoughts. Simply wonderful!

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Akhtar Jawad 13 November 2014

Privileged opportunities play a very important role in our lives, one who is not privileged may be a talented one has to struggle much to rise. But such a self made man becomes an iron man.

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Daniel Brick 30 October 2014

Hi Savita My second attempt to send this message! ... Just a wind-driven leaf and a lone human observer but you create a story of a work of art and the appreciative observer who fulfills the artist's need to communicate. Your description of the leaf's flight is delicate and lovely. I can see what attracted the observer to this drama of natural forces. But my analogy to our situation is especially strong. I used to write poems in a vacuum, now I write for a community at PH. As do you. We artists need at least one, hopefully more PRIVILEGE AUDIENCE.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 01 October 2014

lone dancer of that evening's performance A leaf rising to the sky in the blowing breeze provides lift to life itself. Beautiful poem. Thank you.

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