Khairul Ahsan

Gold Star - 8,868 Points (Bangladesh)

Promise And Faith - Poem by Khairul Ahsan

When you say something,
Without any doubt I believe it.
When you promise something,
To see it fulfilled, I wait.
When I see your promise not kept,
Still I wait,
Hoping it would be met,
Someday.

Every new day as it comes,
I look for your promised response.
Not finding it,
I do not despair, but choose to
Wait for another day,
And not allow my faith to sway.


Poet's Notes about The Poem

Easy promises are easily broken,
Words we cannot keep shouldn't be spoken.

Comments about Promise And Faith by Khairul Ahsan

  • Gold Star - 8,868 Points Khairul Ahsan (3/6/2014 7:01:00 PM)

    @Beauteous Victory
    Thanks for the appreciation. You never cease to inspire me.
    Much obliged! (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 8,868 Points Khairul Ahsan (3/6/2014 12:47:00 PM)

    @Musfiq Us Shaleheen,
    Thanks a lot for reading my poem and leaving your thoughtful comment there. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 8,868 Points Khairul Ahsan (3/5/2014 10:50:00 PM)

    @Aqua Flower
    Thanks for your comment on my poem. Your words inspire me a lot. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 8,868 Points Khairul Ahsan (3/5/2014 12:07:00 PM)

    @Pradip Chattopadhyay
    Thank you very much for your kind appreciation. I am inspired. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 8,868 Points Khairul Ahsan (3/5/2014 11:49:00 AM)

    @Susy Evelyne
    Thanks a lot for stopping by my poem, reading and rating it and leaving your kind comments.
    I am so glad that you liked the poem, thanks! (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,575 Points Musfiq Us Shaleheen (1/23/2014 9:25:00 PM)

    promise is the existence of love and faith so far its long to prove or stand....
    nicely written... (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,250 Points Pradip Chattopadhyay (1/22/2014 3:11:00 AM)

    what matters more than the promise is our faith...very cogently expressed. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 68 Points Susy Evelyne (1/21/2014 6:02:00 PM)

    I like the serene simplicity of this poem and the rhythms of the repetitions. This conveys the sense of time, simply waiting and hoping. Your poem suggests you have patience and trust - which are not easy qualities to cultivate! I hope your faith will be rewarded with the promise kept. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 68 Points Susy Evelyne (1/21/2014 5:37:00 PM)

    I like the serene simplicity of this poem and the rhythms of the repetitions. This conveys the sense of simply waiting and hoping for the promise to be met. Your poem suggests you have patience and trust - which are not easy qualities to cultivate! I hope your faith will be rewarded with the promise kept. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, January 20, 2014



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