M. Asim Nehal

Gold Star - 95,742 Points (26th April / Nagpur)

Promise Me....... - Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Before the slumbering sun woke up
And before the dawn breaks up
Confess to me that the night we spent together
Indeed, Left indelible mark to cherish forever.

I want you to promise me one thing before I go
Behind in galaxy,
undone by the outshining sunlight,
the rhythmic words of the song we set together
And the music we discovered
you shall unleash to this world.

We set our soul like a flower
that folds its petals when dark comes
and breathes not its fragrance
into the phantoms of the night
if the earth that enfolded
victims of oppression will have lonely place
you shall sing those sorrowful tunes of suffering souls,
and will inspire me to talk again.

But if the people understand
what silence reveals to them,
they would have been as close to God
as ' tears in their eyes'.

Topic(s) of this poem: god, life and death

Form: Free Verse


Comments about Promise Me....... by M. Asim Nehal

  • Mohammed Asim Nehal Mohammed Asim Nehal (10/15/2015 11:16:00 AM)

    Thanks to everyone for lovely comments and Valuable vote...... (Report) Reply

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  • T Rajan Evol (10/14/2015 6:41:00 AM)

    This poem soothes the lover's mind and poetically takes him to a wonderland...enjoyable poem.10 (Report) Reply

  • Rajnish Manga Rajnish Manga (10/14/2015 4:59:00 AM)

    It is the presence of mutual love between two lovers, between man and man that does not remain confined to themselves but goes on to flourish in all directions to give a healing touch to the bruised humanity. Let's take a look: And the music we discovered / you shall unleash to this world / you shall sing those sorrowful tunes of suffering souls / and will inspire me to talk again. (Report) Reply

  • Mihaela Pirjol Mihaela Pirjol (10/14/2015 4:33:00 AM)

    This a gentle and poetical write, streaming smoothly throughout the poem with romance and beauty of a heart in love...a really tender write! (Report) Reply

  • Kumarmani Mahakul Kumarmani Mahakul (10/14/2015 1:11:00 AM)

    slumbering sun wakes up....the dawn breaks up...what an amazing imagery is drawn here definitely. Very interesting sharing...10 (Report) Reply

  • Loke Kok Yee (10/14/2015 1:01:00 AM)

    Spoken like a true lover! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, October 14, 2015



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