Promise Of Frozen Pain (Collaboration) Poem by iron panda 23

Promise Of Frozen Pain (Collaboration)



What i thought was right was wrong
its like there was no effort made
when i stepped upon that frozen pond
it was already too late for me to be saved

What i though was right was wrong
guess i left it too late
Now i cant be saved
From the icy burning hate

What i thought was right was wrong
i shouldve never taken that step
we'll now both suffer this burning pain
its something i should regret

What i thought was right was wrong
i wish i had'nt hurt you
Just want a second chance
a chance to start anew

What i thought was right had backfired
it turned out to be wrong.
although, i hurt you, i need your help,
to get through this, im not that strong,

If you help me ill get stronger
& ill promise you no more pain
i promise then,
it'll never happen again,
im making my promise of frozen pain

-this was a collaboration-
(done with Disconnected Soul With A Deceased Heart)
[if you wanna know who wrote what..search this poem & read it on his page]

~IP23

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