hasmukh amathalal

Gold Star - 44,557 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Promise With Words - Poem by hasmukh amathalal

You need to be with me
As shed is available only with tree
You will find real comfort
After safely reaching to port

I shall not hurry to rescue
But offer what is really due
Take you out form the course of uncertainty
And provide safety with real stability

You were offering loyalty
That is good in return for honesty
Both of it can make world so beautiful
A pride to live with and call it a successful

You shall go on drive
Till means are found to survive
But believe confidently in self to live
With real resolution to revive

You may have vigor and intensity
That speaks clearly about capacity
Yet it may need beautiful company
It may come at proper time from so many

I shall promise with words
But not surprise with work
It shall always be available
Once you sense some trouble

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  • Gold Star - 44,557 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/24/2014 8:55:00 PM)

    GOOD


    Agatha AnubaluLess than a minute ago
    NICE CONCEPT, I LIKE IT. (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 44,557 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/24/2014 8:42:00 PM)

    You need to be with me
    As shed is available only with tree (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, January 24, 2014

Poem Edited: Saturday, January 25, 2014


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