Protiva by Shamshad Begum Barbhuiya

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Protiva

Protiva

Protiva lukiye thake shobar rokto konikay
Opekhay thake tara prosfhutio hoyar ashay
Dak dile dana mele chotto projapotir nay
urte chay mohasunye renu makha nijer danay

ashon khuje tara tader shorbousso shikhore
koto je protiva lukiye jay roye jay bhitore
pay ni upojukto shomoy, jol o batash
shoto cheshta koreo paini prosfutito hoyar abokash

shogramroto tara ondhokar theke alooker dike
nijer ashon dite chay shokol manushke
bishobashir kache porichoy koralu kobi guruke
taroka shomragge ghushito korlo kolpona chawlake

heyo korona kokhono kauke dekhle pother dhare
ki jani kun mohot protiva lukkaeto taar bhitore
hoy to ekk diin fhute ut be upojukto jol shar gubore
hoy to ekk din shornakhore tar naam likhe jaabe ai ambore

shamshad begum barbhuiya

Shamshad Begum Barbhuiya

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Nazibar Rahim (6/30/2005 6:40:00 PM)
Madam,
in it's own style it has become a poetry under universal category. Use of similie is fine.
In my opinion, Spelling; Punctuation; synonyms should be considered.
I give 7 out of 10 Marks.
Congratulation.I expect more such creations from you.
Yours admirer,
Nazib


Shamshad Begum Barbhuiya (8th April 1973 / Guwahati)