((((Proud Father)) Poem by Marvin Brato Sr

((((Proud Father))

Rating: 5.0


My son, at your birth
You are like a jewel
Instills an innate mirth
An aura ringing a bell

My son, as a kid
You are creative
As you always did
Arts quite perceptive

My son, as adolescent
You act as regular lad
With a mature ascent
Make me feels glad

My son, as you now stride
On this graduation installs
A gained triumphant pride
Flowing in me like waterfalls

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Reshma Ramesh 31 March 2009

congratulations to you both.............made each other proud.....wellpenned

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Irene Clark-hogg 23 March 2009

I do like the way you describe the flowing of your feeling - like a waterfall. This is a wonderful tribute to your son. Irene

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Fiona Davidson 21 March 2009

Beautiful flowing poetry for a much adored son...thanks for sharing this Marvin...10+++

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Alison Cassidy 21 March 2009

An ecstatic tribute to a dearly loved son - from birth to graduation. The reader can truly feel the 'pride flowing in you like waterfalls'. Congratulations Marvin. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Marvin Brato Sr

Marvin Brato Sr

Davao City, Philippines
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