Prove Your Presence Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Prove Your Presence



What can we do to educate?
First to self and authoritatively relate
Bring about facts before
And then explore

We can improve
And prove
That we are prepared
To accept challenges when really offered

We need each time
To be pointed out in time
'You could bring this to my notice'
We often complain helplessly with no choice

We plead ignorance
And block its deliverance
We care for self and take side of narrow interest
That not only harms buts prove worst too

As sun need not try to prove presence
You too can shine with appropriate chance
Do not drag feet when opportunity knocks
As I will be life time chance and not joke

Friday, October 24, 2014
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 27 October 2014

nice Shariqa Husnain51 minutes ago gud 27 Oct

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 27 October 2014

Eh Aimee Lowenstern7 hours ago Needs tighter rhyme scheme and more metaphor.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 27 October 2014

wonderful Travis Kelly52 minutes ago Loved it Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 27 October 2014

wonderful Travis Kelly52 minutes ago Loved it Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 24 October 2014

What can we do to educate? First to self and authoritatively relate

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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