She said, ‘be perfect If you want to be my man.’
But they say, I said, No one is perfect.
Then she said, ‘you haven’t heard from any man
When one says, Practice makes the man perfect? ’
She smiled thinking she had out spoken
But I was in love and wanted to tell above
All that I wish for, all that I had taken
And said she’d love me for love begets love.
yes, love be gets love....the diction and point of view is not usual...spice is normal... love it...carry on
The one who sees beauty in real and in virtual is the perfect man........ Again a brilliant and beautiful piece by a brilliant poet .........
ha hah Every one wants to see his/her beloved/loved above all...a contrastive realities, one side we say practice makes a man perfect, on the other side we heard no one is perfect in this world...well truth
As human we always imperfect, so being imperfect is a perfection for a human_Soul
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
a poem that was really smart, the comparison is right on target bring us to think deeper its words so simple but full of meaning really really good poem thanks for sharing