Proximity Poem by asma bahrainwala

Proximity

Rating: 5.0


Let us be this close tonight.
Let us blur out the boundaries;
Let us dissolve the barriers;
Let you and me be us tonight.

So close that I can feel your breath;
So close that our heartbeats blend;
So close that only the touch remains;
So close that you and me become us tonight.

Let us be this close tonight.
Let our love transcend into eternity;
Let only the touch be our identity;
Let you and me be us tonight.

Let us be this close tonight.
Let you and me be us tonight.



3rd September 2006

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Reuben Matthew 06 November 2006

a beautifully structured poem. n i agree with peter that this poem reads like a spell. Reuben.

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Peter A. Crowther 27 September 2006

Great poem! Reads like a magical spell or incantation

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Duncan Wyllie 03 September 2006

Beautiful words of love and light, Awesome by design and content Love duncan X

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