Moring has arrived and new light is seen,
Crows are doing caw, caw to awaken,
Time is refreshing moment of appearance,
Sun is smiling in far eastern horizon.
Purely we feel now gentle wind is blowing,
Faith for God is growing more with light,
We are realizing the path of eternity,
Having journey in this is wisely noticed.
Touch of cool breeze and gentle wind
Both are motivating mind for devotion,
Strife is not coming at all in mind,
Beauty is praying before God forever.
Devotional attitudes are seen in leaves,
Trees are twisting their turn towards light,
Interesting perception is brought up ahead,
Fresh air is blowing for favour of purity.
© Kumarmani Mahakul,12 August,2017. All rights reserved.
Pure morning air refreshes our minds. We love such freshness and motivate eagerness. This poem is interesting one.
Dear poets, thank you very much for taking time and commenting. Your effort is highly appreciated. May God bring happiness for you..@Morning Air
Morning air carries purity and we feel pure essence. God gives us wisdom and we feel his mercy. Swinging in his wisdom is our fortune. We love God very much. With love and hope we are growing with him. This is a great poem and you are a nice poet.
Morning air has greater breath of freshness. This poem is truly a lovely gem. This is interestingly penned. Thank you very much for sharing this.
Devotional attitudes are seen in leaves, Trees are twisting their turn towards light, - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - Very good use of imagery to make your point strong as well as beautiful. Our souls do turn to the light until we have twisted our instincts with our bad choices. Well chosen topic to write upon.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
The beauty of sunrise and the crisp clean feel of morning air. Great use of imagery to recreate this feeling of oneness with the universal spirit of god.