Put The Gun In My Mouth Poem by Rachel McKnight

Put The Gun In My Mouth

Rating: 5.0


Put the gun in my mouth
Then shot away
Go on and do it
Have you nothing to say?

You threatin me that
You'll snap and pull
So today is that day
Put it in my skull

get it stuck deep inside
I want it there
In my skull
Under my hair

The blood won't stop
It flows free
I'm face down on the floor
Blood covers my knees

It's not murder
Don't you see?
I was the one
Who wanted this glee

So maby when I'm done
With this whole thing
I will fly up high
Where angels sing

But I wonder if they
Where waiting to see
The gun in my mouth
For it was me

But it's to late
The deed is done
My spirt waches
As you call 911

The ambulance arives
But it's to late
I listen as you tell them
My name and birthdate

I hear you cry
As you tell of the part
Where I shot myself
And hurt your heart

So I await
The day you die
To say I'm sorry
I made you cry

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mohammad Akmal Nazir 30 June 2011

Great poem with a very strong structure. Nice sentiments and imagery. Voted 10. Thanks for sharing..... Kindly read and vote my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2. Regards Akmal

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