Put To Shame Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Put To Shame

Rating: 5.0


Animal from inside
In rebellion to invade
But I keep it under control
Waits still for rebellious call

It may show its ugliness
With complete innocence on face
No one may come to know
As lust for hunt may any time grow

I do not know when it will turn
Into strict wild animal term
Forget about human relation
And inflict injury in question

Now I claim to be perfect gentleman
Worldly desires in deep corner still remain
God only known when will I turn animal again
I pray almighty to kill animal for not causing the pain

World may laugh at me for inhumanly act
If by bad luck red handed caught
“See this man who was considered pious”
“Put to shame from being famous”

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 10 October 2013

Animal from inside In rebellion to invade

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 10 October 2013

Stephen Gagne7 minutes ago Not English. This reads as if it were written by Andy Kaufmann's stereotypic foreign person, Latka Gravas

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 10 October 2013

Not something I could relate to... Ad Johnson3 minutes ago But quite well written.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 10 October 2013

Superb sir Vijaya Sarathi Putcha7 minutes ago Well said. Straight to the point whom you refer. Very elderly thinking. Poem came out of experience. Comment +1 good flow

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 10 October 2013

Ruth Courtney7 minutes ago good emotion famous good ending

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 10 October 2013

eally nice rashidmukkum2 minutes ago Its a good poem, I do not know when it will turn Into strict wild animal term Forget about human relation And inflict injury in question these lines show us his skill as poet. Comment +1 its fine

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 10 October 2013

Zainab Qamer6 minutes ago very complicated i didntt understand but i think it has some deep meaning Comment +1 uhh... what?

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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